Good 1: This one is cool, MIRRORS FOR SPACE! It got me right off the bat and even though its primarily scientific terms it is well organized and spends minimal time on anything but the mirrors (the reason I was reading it in the first place)
http://www.globenewswire.com/newsroom/news.html?d=232232
Good 2: I liked this one, its a little wordy but all the important pieces of info are in the first two paragraphs and then the summation of the rest are in the first sentence.
http://www.globenewswire.com/newsroom/news.html?d=232250
Good 3: This one is about Snickers teaming with the NFL to make a video about a huge blunder in NFL history that I had never heard of. It does a good job of quickly telling you about the video and the kick, going on to give you a link to it-AWESOME!
http://www.prnewswire.com/news-releases/snickers-hungers-to-give-leon-lett-a-taste-of-redemption-129742703.html
Bad 1: This one may be good if your a wall street fanatic but my god I would never want to read this again. Its a massive paragraph of jargin that applies to a event that has passed.
http://www.globenewswire.com/newsroom/news.html?d=232240
Bad 2: This one is really an important release. It highlights the gap in manufacturing jobs that is increasing because of retirement rates, and that its a great place for young people to fit in. Its just to dry and the title "Retiring Baby Boomers.." not, "Huge job market becoming open to younger generations"
http://www.prnewswire.com/news-releases/retiring-baby-boomers-to-cost-largest-manufacturers-100-million-each-over-next-five-years-129525633.html
Bad 3: Its a news release about a announcement of a conference call! For the love of pete could it get anymore anticlimactic? So bad in so many ways...
http://www.prnewswire.com/news-releases/brandywine-realty-trust-announces-quarterly-dividends-and-confirms-third-quarter-2011-earnings-release-and-conference-call-129735453.html
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